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Deleted page 5 from the infamous Alcatraz High #5.

SPOILER ALERT!!! Do not read unless you have read issues Alcatraz High #0-4. Or go ahead, don't say I didn't warn you...

Panel 1: Hero shot of Miguel and Steve on the balcony.
Miguel says:" Steve and I were strolling the campus when we noticed you were in distress."
" I realize that you all have been through a harrowing ordeal and need to relax..."

Panel 2: Miguel: "... Luckily, I've come prepared with this body lotion with soothing chamomile..."
"Who needs a rub down?"

Panel 3: Cheerleaders all race to embrace Miguel and Steve.
Girls: "Me!" " Me first!" " Oh, Miguel!"
Miguel: "Ladies! Ladies..."

Panel 4: Miguel and Steve are surrounded by the beautiful cheerleaders holding them tightly. Miguel is loving it and Steve looks annoyed at Miguel.
Miguel: Please. Please... One at a time. There is plenty of Miguel to go around!"

Panel 5: Night time. The girls are nowhere to be seen, Miguel is dreaming. Steve still annoyed.
Miguel: "... and I have plenty of body lotion"
Steve: " Oh please, that is NOT going to happen!"


And Steve was right. This sequence is now officially deleted. I hope you guys dig it for what it was. It would have been fun to do, but ultimately it didn't fit the story.

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simply epic!! i just love the attention to detail and the very powerful expressions!!!!!!!!
:iconbarrypresh:
Thank you! This is my shorthand on how I draw the characters, so the final version would have even more detail than this.

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